K. Well here's what I'll tell you. #1 the bpm of that song are not where u want them. Sounds like ur around 80. Nowadays you wanna be between 110 & 125 for most urban music. For what you went with the riff is off. His delivery is off. Personally I would be careful with ur content released in any capacity. Simply because any content released goes into ur library. If the intent is to simply be a local artist or a YouTube hit then keep on that struggle. But I'd tell him get back in the lab & see if he can find his passion. What makes him relate to music. Is it simply a hustle or is he doing something bigger. Hopefully what I'm saying makes sense in this capacity & I wish yall luck.