CIS Haiku

[jackedaround]

High adheavy CIS
then a headed, canes losing
out of champions

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

3/10.
Intrigued by the content, but it's got to be 5-7-5, bro.

 

[Pitcher in the Rye]

Every post the same

Anxiety fans the flames

New hobbies needed

 

[P-Tizzle]

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

Every post the same

Anxiety fanning the flames

New hobbies needed

6.5/10.
Excellent subject matter. Added a rhyme for good measure. But anxiety has 4 syllables, my friend. Strike the word "the" and this is 8.5/10 material.

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

The blending of a traditional style of Japanese poetry with the misery of CIS.

 

[miamicanephins]

Rollin with your posse is the only way to roll,
There's not another posse with more points scored.
I got a def posse, you got a bunch of dudes,
We're gettin' dirty looks from those other sucka crews.

Peace out.

 

[Empirical Cane]

Last on Saturday
Our suck, Hurricanes losing
Out of Cristobal

 

[Empirical Cane]

Rollin with your posse is the only way to roll,
There's not another posse with more points scored.
I got a def posse, you got a bunch of dudes,
We're gettin' dirty looks from those other sucka crews.

Peace out.

You clearly didn't read the instructions.

 

[CaneFanWNY]

The ads and complaints
Naught one tab with some nun taint
Legends live past graves

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

Coaches ******* up,
players fail, apathy, suck.
Painful growth, or nah?

 

[Pitcher in the Rye]

6.5/10.
Excellent subject matter. Added a rhyme for good measure. But anxiety has 4 syllables, my friend. Strike the word "the" and this is 8.5/10 material.

Fixed. I'm not the one to break the rules of such an ancient art.

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

Last on Saturday
Our suck Hurricanes losing
Out of Cristobal

I feel your pain, here. Very bleak. I don't 100% share this world view (yet), but a solid 8/10. Comma between suck and Hurricanes could make this even darker?

 

[No_Fly_Zone]

The ads and complaints
Naught one tab with some nun taint
Legends live past graves

Early leader in the club house, IMO.

 

[miamicanephins]

You clearly didn't read the instructions.

Let me try again,

Cristobal robs
CIS throbs
Stoops, man for the job

 

[Empirical Cane]

Maudes do the damage
Drop ban hammer on muppets
CIS is rough

 

[Empirical Cane]

Let me try again,

Cristobal robs
CIS throbs
Stoops, man for the job

getting there.

 

[Silver King]

The Orange Bowl Curse
Championships Vanished Since
Winning Culture Gone

 

[Canestomp]

Twelve-Thirty Kickoffs?
Amateur A-C-C Crews?
Not Even Mad Anymore.

 

[CanesZ06]

Sorry *** players
Makes for a sorry *** team
Should have hired Lane