Good job, Pete.
If you had any possible room for improvement, you may want to try and demonstrate a bit more Southern Twang.
Twang adds flavor, and makes one seem much more intelligent - although in your case, I admit, there's not much space there for improvement.
For example, instead of saying something is "worse," you can use the word, "worser." Everyone will know you're down deep, a "Good Ol' Boy." If you feel the need for any other advice, just ask, and myself or Franchise will be happy to share.
Good job you're doing - across the board.